Thanks for the feedback!
>>46793061 HJanon? Any plans for the next chapter of Kuro's errand boy? Seeing as how I had to cut this chapter in two while editing and have the bulk of the next chapter already written, hopefully that will take less than a month and a half to be done.
>>46793343...thanks for the kind words, AI-chama? I do struggle with dialogue a lot.
>>46820664Thanks for the feedback! I did spend some time thinking on the setting, hopefully I can live up to the expectations. Characterization is something I struggle with a lot. You're pretty on point on Kurokami - I intended for her to be a bit more of an antisocial loner than she actually acts, plus some culture shock with the whole Kami thing, but I may have gone a bit too far.
You're right on the mark about the dark secret, even if it has been plainly stated a few too many times to count as a straight secret by this point. The specifics are probably getting explored two chapters from nowHopefully her characterization will get more appealing once Anon can get past her initial antisocial behavior.