>>76496120Note for any baker: "Loli Kami Requiem" should probably be replaced with an indirect reference to the song title, because "loli" might trip the autosage filter.
>>76496207Your phrasing could be more diplomatic in places. The Sayu story, for example, sounds dismissive when referred to as "a meltdown". I personally would've gone with "Suffers an emotional breakdown on stream due to feelings of not being wanted by the wider vtuber community",
or outright omitted it.>will be graduation on 5/12Yuko Yurei, like basically anybody in the Small Corpo section, should probably have her affiliation listed. If people knew who they were, then they'd be impactful enough to not be in the Small Corpos section tabun maybe.
You've got Holo news and Indie news in the Other section.
I generally avoid putting relative timeframes like "now" because it can sometimes be a day or two between news happening and/or a round-up making it into an OP. If you've ever wondered why I put hard dates, even for things that have already happened, that's why.
You missed some local events happening, like HFZ DARK's 3rd Anniversary happening this Sunday @ 11a ET.All in all, a good first run.