>>73833822Im sorry buddy, I tried to give your fic an honest try but i cant stand feeding at all and i actually retched a bit.
I think you could polish the pacing a bit and maybe reel back the scope so the scenes have more room to breathe because as it stands, it just goes and goes. The sex scenes are also a bit too short and dont get you going because they are over so fast.
Again, i really tried and the fact im this ashamed of tapping out probably means that you did a terrific job in that aspect of the fetish so kudos for that?
