>>23992721Let Me Feel Your Pain
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQipJvRwPXdgEWqGwJSU6CVyPHeZqBEuFNqrCxXRF2Tt07H8Z1EmF3mJWvZw8R_EcksBumcYpztE8uX/pubI tried to take the advice from a few anons in the last thread telling me to take it a bit slower and describe the scene a bit more. Do tell me me how I did. I hope you enjoy.