>>24405207I prefer it when it's a little less on the nose... like
Alban successfully steals the crown jewels, makes his escape unnoticed and as he returns to his safehouse *BAM* gets knocked out cold by an opposing band of thieves who were waiting for him to do the easy job.
These guys have a long standing grudge with him, so on top of stealing the jewels from him they tie him up, gag him and blindfold him before taking Alban to a farway location. Alban wakes up inside a car's trunk, and he feels the car driving for hours on end, minute after minute his desperation and despair continues to grow larger and larger, he's exasperated, hyperventilating.
He knows what's coming.
As the car stops and his kidnappers open the trunk they pick him up and throw him into the ground, it's gravel, sand and mud everywhere. They stand him on his knees and take off the blindfold; in front of him lies a pile of corpses, his former friends and thieves. He chokes on his gag and begins to cry, although muffled.
Alban is severely beat up, punched, kicked, hit with bricks, crowbars, rebar, baseball bats. His entire body is a piñata filled with guts and blood, his bones are smashed, his intestines and organs are turned into mush, he's bruised and bloodied, his face is unrecognizeable.
Albans lets out a final whimper with what's left of his voice box and lungs as he's finally put to rest with a shotgun blast.