>>72975656I haven't commented on your chapters since the ones back in the contest, but I do check them out when I notice an update since they do have a relaxing prose to them and the overall intrigue is entertaining. I suppose I'm a little confused on what's got ya all twisted up in terms of the story and how you're releasing it. I think there is some merit to waiting on more of the story being finished before releasing certain parts, but it depends on if you're looking for iterative feedback or not. Releasing segments as you get them done is just one of the ways you can do things, and that's just fine. It's also pretty natural to get attached to your own passion projects. Hell I can speak to that, it takes up a lot of my headspace and I kinda love that something I'm creating can make me feel that way. That of course comes with its own baggage of wanting to make it the best it can be and giving it your all, which can be both invigorating and draining at the same time, so it's also important to recognize how it might be affecting other aspects of your life and choosing what comes first. At the end of the day, when your own projects become almost like these living breathing parts of you, just like you want them to be their best, they want you to be your best too, so it's important to give yourself the slack you need. Just remember that you need to do what's best for you sometimes, since if something happens to you, your story can't be finished anyway, and neither you or your characters want that to happen. Just keep truckin up through life and you'll make it.