>>41227393Thanks for the read and feedback bro. I definitely agree with that in hindsight. I took an approach to try and write something shorter and not let myself get bogged into putting in too much detail, but after feedback from those first two chapters, it's clear that's an approach that doesn't work super well with my writing style right now. Chapter 2 will likely suffer from that same feeling since I wrote both at the same time. Let me know what you think if there's anything I could put focus on doing better.
