>>49559062Wow that's a MUCH better ending. It really nails that feeling throughout the rest of the fic about how fucked up the hypnosis actually is and how gross the girls are while still keeping it relatively hot with the sexual stuff. Really elevates it now that it sticks the landing. Nice stuff!
>>49569366I think it might be the pose. She's leaning back/pushing her hips forward so it kinda hides her butt, not that that outfit particularly accentuates it
