>>35080936Before I begin my review, can I ask why I can’t find chapter 12 to 15 in the archives? It abruptly stops at chapter 11 and I’m wondering if, for some reason, you took down those stories. Because if you did, can I get a link to them? I read your stories sporadically and I don’t remember much about them. Anyways, for the review, honestly, I don’t know what to say, since I was kinda disappointed by this chapter and I don’t want to be overtly critical in the critique. So, really, the only thing I can say is that you could have done better for this chapter. Despite my feelings of dissatisfaction, it was an enjoyable read. Have this Fauna image
