>>73424095I also noticed Kiara for that one part too. Didn't think too much of them at first but it's often good to introduce characters earlier than when their existence would be mandatory to make things feel more natural in the world so good on that.
For Chloe's role, I always felt that since her role in HoloX was relatively underwhelming as a fixer (American definition I'm assuming) and cleaner so I thought that always could've been some sort of cover-up for something else. Kind of like Ame's time travel thing but actually intended so I think it worked out well. Kind of rounds out the RPG class dynamics of HoloX well enough too
Also, even if you didn't think of the fighting styles all to deeply, it's a pretty neat bonus when parallels and connections like that can be made with some consistency. Even unintentionally, might imply you just got a good sense of what just fits the "feel" of the character if that makes sense. Plus it at least gives you a cool idea how how you may want to implement other character's fighting styles if that's your writing style
I even started having ideas since I read the story. One thing I thought up was an explanation to Chloe's Spider-Man-like expressive mask. That being it's an LED kind of mask made by Koyori that just scans her face and portrays the proper expression on the outside. Like the angels in Hazbin Hotel I guess for reference. I'm probably at least goning to jot down random Holo ideas I get in case I want to remember an idea and follow through on it