>>65535923 (me)Also yes, i had more plans for Iroha. I told this to AuntieAnon but Iroha's cousin is Hiro Kazama, the joke assasin for the brothel prompt.
She had a bigger role and the idea was that her puppy love of a sheltered girl kept making her try to win over the scumbag (anon in this case). I had some imput for this kind of thing from some friends specially, who always talk about that one guy they got hung up in highschool and kept thinking he was gonna turn up a new leaf and come to them. At the end, i had to cut it because if the Iroha subplot here feels tacked on, in that version it was a complete different chapter that didnt feel good to read
also it ended with her stealing a kiss from you in front of Mori but that was too much.
So it was either push this out and accept my shortcomings, oooor go back and try to make a series, which i truly dont want to because i feel like i would have to pad the shit out of it
