>>26221147Very cute, very sweet, good payoff, nice job anon! I think it's paced pretty well honestly. If you're really itching for criticism, I suggest crossposting in the writing general, those guys are more experienced with the ins-and-outs of sex scenes and AU characterization
>>26223422>>26224074Anon... use the previous masterpost, or literally any other rentry document for that matter, as reference for the structure of the URL
