>>64684995Anon... this is too much. I know I said a landing page would be good but there is no way I can digest all this and use that knowledge to better understand the story. I think the only one who can truly appreciate this worldbuilding is you because fuck me there's just so much of it.
With that said, I just read Operation Nimrod chapter 2 and enjoyed it very, very much. I still don't know shit about the setting besides how the map looks now, but that was a banger of a chapter. You're setting up a lot of pieces and I'm excited to see how everything turns out. Loved the introduction of Bae and how her soldiers speak in an Aussie accent, that was a nice touch. Also
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! SUBARUUU!! Despite only seeing her for a chapter and a half I grew really attached to the way she'd insult people and I'm genuinely upset to see her go. I hope the Kapetan can build a fun dynamic with the other girls now that she's gone.>>64691930YooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHAT THE FUCK!? I thought you were dead! Literally yesterday I was talking about how this series had been dropped! But you're here, you're back!
I enjoyed every bit of this chapter, and it was great seeing Anon get excited with seeing the evo come to life. I'm glad you're actually giving him a backstory and a personality too, it gives everything a bit more life. Coco was fun as well, she's always so unique when people write her.The only criticism I have is that there isn't enough of this and the chapter is too short. I need more! I want to see mountain pass drifting! Praying for the next chapter, hope you can keep writing.
