>>12721692As ever, you really push the limits of my willing suspension of disbelief. Penetrative sex during a fast-pace game of air hockey, and through the power of dick Anon gets better at the game the less attention he pays to it, despite his opponent's mounting desperation...and somehow NOBODY NOTICES. That's a really difficult pill to swallow and I doubt I'd have kept reading if it weren't for the fact I know your Chocosmut is packed full of the good-good.
Speaking of, I god damn LOVE your smut. While the idea of remaining unnoticed whilst having sex during an air hockey game is too farfetched, the writing itself was utterly fantastic, practically dripping with emotion. I could totally imagine her meek, panicked-yet-lustful exclamations as she felt Anon's member pressing against and inside her. The following scene inside the photo booth was too much to handle, and my balls, body and life force were all drained dry.
As for the fluff, there's not much to say apart from the fact that it was crazy cute and I was thoroughly enjoying reading it. If I had to pick a single scene in particular so far, it'd be cheekily denying her the Aporo sweets before twisting her final attempt into a public kiss. I was smiling the whole time.
I haven't read past the photo booth scene yet, because I want to savor it like a fine wine for when I've next got a boner. God bless you anon, this chapter has been everything I'd hoped for and from the looks of it, there's still plenty left to go.