>>34293328This really isn't much better despite writing more words. You're calling the lyrics nonsensical, the track generic as well as overmixed, and the mix all over the place, but you haven't actually explained where or how the lyrics are nonsensical, in what way the track is generic and overmixed, or how you think the mix is all over the place.
>sounded okay on the mixed portionsThis part is especially confusing cause mixing is the part of the process where the various tracks are brought together to create the finished song. Do you think the song has portions where it isn't mixed? What parts?
