>>37568534>turning into the worlds biggest gigaslut because of a few daddy issues isn’t to most realistic premise to begin with.I guess you're right, but I needed an initial reason for Ayame to try it out and realise she loves having sex, I didn't want to say "she started inviting guys over and became a slut just because". Maybe some more in-depth reasoning and a slower build up to her circumstances would have helped.
>the Aqua arc felt a bit castratedYeah, I'm starting to see that. As I said before, she WAS going to play a larger role in the other versions of the story and only ended up being a little useless because of the direction the fic went. That's not really an excuse, though, I probably should have given the onion drama some more attention.
>The smut might not be the most ball-busting piece of erotica in the archiveI'd expect so. If you don't mind me asking, can you pinpoint anything I could do to make it hotter? I might find myself writing
Towa sex in the distant future.
Anyway, cheers for reading and enjoying, it's pleasant to hear.
>>37576684>>37604251Nah, I'm neither a good writer nor a fast one in comparison to most of the thread. The last time one of my series had a proper update was August LAST year.
>>37577478No problem man, just you saying you liked it is more than enough, thank you. I'm not even sure how a prequel would work. Wouldn't be about Anon since he's had a boring life, so it'd have to centre around Ayame.
I don't have any plans to open an AO3 account but shit, if someone who has one wants to upload it and say it's from /wg/ in /vt/ I'd be cool with that.
>>37617502Gracias.
>>37618024Yup, tried squeezing all the rrats I knew in. Might have forgotten some but I think most of the ridiculous ones are there.
>>37631663>I gotta say the dialouge by far my favourite part of the fic, everything flowed so well and Anon's and Ayame's interactions were always such a treat.Bless, I'm glad to hear that since I worked pretty hard on the those. Even I as the writer found myself liking the dynamic between the two characters I had created.
>SpoilerI was originally going to have that be way more in your face, but decided to tone it down. Good to see you noticed.
It also ties into the STD joke. 
