>>57363984it's the same thing with the nerissa-novelight poster, except less sexual in the case of tragedyanon. there's a form of affection in both cases either way
>>57364035>>57364255if you say they're good ideas, you've certainly piqued my interest, but i do empathize with disliking the elements of yourself in your writing. still, as much as it may piss you off, i would hope it doesn't dissuade you from trying to write in general. and regardless of whether or not your writing "needs" to be more "substantial," i'm of the opinion that all kinds of writing have some value and with the wide variety of anons we have in this particular thread, i think what you might have could really resonate with some of us here
>>57364151that's true, the xmas eve and waiter/waitress stories were really nice. gave me nice and cozy dreams one time of being a regular at a restaurant that shiorin owned. and in regard to me pigeonholing you into that tragedy story, i only did it because of how much it kinda resonated with me so it's the first thing that comes to mind (went through a similar experience) lol.
i thought about using a breakup letter my ex- gave me and replacing all the names and posting it here to see the reactions>>57364447maybe you could use the fact that her tea party (while really endearing) was scuffed with all the bugs as a jumping point? like something akin to you comforting her about it?
