>>67816749I can do more.
Lighting source is inconsistent, implies both an above light and a backlight, shows that the artists doesn't understand lighting fundamentals and just thought "highlights at edges looks cool".
Uki's left arm is not positioned correctly in relation to his shoulder. Try to tilt one shoulder back and reach out as he does. It's an incredibly uncomfortable pose showing the artist does not understand muscle anatomy.
Adam's apple positions don't make sense. No knowledge of neck anatomy.
Actually no knowledge of anatomy in general cause why tf is the Fulger's right arm shaped so that his upper arm is low enough to reach Uki's waist from his position, but his lower arm is so short it doesn't even reach across said waist?
Anyway, it's amateur. No fundamentals.
