>>73869303Finally found the time to read the whole thing, and I hope you don't mind me linking the story here for potential readers!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRHaT0B-oj0tDU7UYo3-a7uEv0DJUXumgDAcVNSZkEg1Xnmv_YTPBBa5EFFyqXh6qpd-TqOE8ONtGIP/pubAnyways, it was a very good read! Contrary to those less-than-enlightened individuals in the writing thread, the "eating like a bird" scene was hot as fuck. Lovely descriptions of food that helps with setting up the mood. And for someone that doesn't care for sex scenes that much, I found them good too. It helps that Reine's progression is steady, and she's bigger each scene. The only nitpick I have is that (You)r motives happens a bit too suddenly, but I can see that as just something to get the ball running into the actual meat (lol) of the story. Still, if you're planning to write more, and I hope you do, some more introspection/details during that pivotal moment are very appreciated.
Thanks for the fic! Have a beeg Reine as thanks.
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