>>1718409Not the OR, but here are the critiques. More color slivers like in the previous. Most obvious peeking is on the hair highlights. Couple more on the ribbons and some in the hair.
The lines for the eye scanner thing need to be consistent. Line thickness is really fat at the top, but skinnier on the sides and bottom. Make sure your nodes are parallel in both placement and handles.
The bottom of the face has a really sharp indent that shouldn't be like that. Go back to the original and see about how smooth that should be
Last major thing is on the... sword gun thing? You used a radial gradient that is really obvious and the banding is not very good. You should use a linear gradient of about 4-5 colors going across the whole sword gun thing, like it is in the original.
