>>1780830You got a couple more color bleeding areas. You have one near the tie, and one above her left eye (marked in green).
You are missing shadows under the hair on both sides of her face, and above her left eye. You are missing shadows on her collar. You are missing a radial gradient on her right leg. Both legs should have the same radial gradient, and the gradient should be coming from the middle of the legs to the outer edges, instead of from the left side. The shadows on the skirt, hair, and face could also use much more shading or black in order to show more emphasis. The collar and sweater both have good shading, so you can use those as references for how rich/dark the shading elsewhere should be.
Lineart wise, you are missing both eyebrows above her eyes. You are missing a line on the hair under her face on the right side. Another line for the hair is going over her right eye. You either want to layer it below the eye, or have the eye color match the lineart coloring, so they meld together.