>>6040529Looks good, but the clock looks kind of out of place. Maybe it's just the font, but there is definitely something off. It's not bad though, the general aesthetic is quite nice.
>8/10>>6040543The wallpaper makes it kind of hard to read the text on the widget, so change one of the two. Also, I'm not really a fan of fonts with serif(s?) for phones, just makes it look dated. If you can, try to make the nav. bar completely clear or gradient. Not bad though.
>7/10>>6040640Wallpaper is pretty nice, I'd change the font on the widget to something a little thinner, but that's my preference. Remove the names of the apps. Change the folder to just one icon, it'll clean it up a bit. Remove the page indicator on the bottom, even if it is the only page, just creates a needless dot.
Again, not bad, but could use some work.
>7/10>>6040675Nice improvements. Looks really clean and fits together quite nicely. The only thing I'd change is making the nav. bar completely clear if, 'cause the sort of transparent black is kind of messing with the flow. Also, the wallpaper looks a bit grainy, but that might just be because its a screenshot.
>9/10 
