I want opinions on this story premise I'm working on.

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"None shall die alone or unknown."

On October 13, 2015, 8:02 PM, that is the simple message two young men get in their emails from their estranged father, who one year prior inexplicably and plainly told them that they would not inherit anything from him. No house, no land, no money, nothing.

They think nothing of it, and go about their day.

A daydream comes to them, one where they see their father's own day, as experienced through his bedridden body.

The dream ends on October 14, 2015, 8:02 PM, with him dying alone in his dark room, as his voice echoes in their minds:

"None shall die alone or unknown."

They then find themselves on October 13, 2015, 8:02 PM.

This is the story of a repeating day, of the passing of a torch, of the beginning of two people who become the world's Confidants.

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Did this premise entice you to read this story?

If you're interested in this, and even want to collaborate with me on it, look up "Cold Bricks Glow" on wordpress.