>>2087913Very nice. I don't know if I'm in any position to make criticism, but here goes:
- There is pixel-thin gap between her left (our right) shoulder and her hair when viewed at 100%. It would probably look better if you closed it.
- You forgot to finish the shadowed part of the stripe (far left, 2nd stripe from armpit, near first crease).
- Some line thickness inconsistency. It's very time-consuming to get this right, and some people aren't even bothered by this, but I am (and even I can't get it perfect).
Overall very good; can't wait to see more.
