>>749528i feel bad that everyone kinda dog-piled OP witut any concrete constructive criticism
so i did a few over lay edits to test myself and put my money where my dang mouth is
most of the things I pointed out could easily be chalked up to stylistic differences and should be taken with a grain of salt
ps i love ur art style and hope that you continue posting here
>>749624lmao thats hilarious
now OP's antagonized the oc bread and gotten singled out as easy pickings for bullying
if ur reading this OP just avoid obvious bait
you'll just be entertaining terminally online wierdos who get joy from inane arguments
