>>53154813I'm writing a pokemon isekai
>War vet>survived tyrannical government, Civil war, WW3, and Geomagnetic reversal.>out camping when isekai >drop in Unova before BW>run into and befriend zoroark family, also run into hunter J>Have trouble adapting to civ life before, let alone in a world so peaceful>protag inadvertently change the plot of both bw and bw2 by interfering and exposing plasma.>find job as delivery man.>don't run gym circuit or capture pokemon.>piss off Ghetsis at rally, also runs into player character>Ghetsis split team plasma to slit into "good" and evil to lower the heat due to protag>protag try to live a quiet life but keep getting dragged into events.>eventually meet up with all major characters by either job or BS>Every time have run in with gang, poacher, or villain. they usually ends up getting hospitalized>Also teach his pokemon to fight.>local police and interpol investigate because WTF >one interpol officer is sent to investigate and figure out protag is not from this world>confronts protag, and protag try to kill self because of state secrets>Is stopped by his pokemon, interpol officer take him in for questioning >horrified by protag worlds, interpol doesn't believe him but agent dose >Ghetsis learns how dangerous protag is, hire hunter J to kill protag>J set a trap and gases him and two other characters. Barely get them out alive but has ptsd flashback.>protag goes nut and hunt down J>protag crashes her ship, kill most of her crew, and is about to kill J but stop by agent because justice >Protag reluctantly agrees but J laugh so protag break her leg.>interpol take over>plasma is scared shit less and they lay low for a bit. also accelerated many of team plasma plan>both interpol and Team plasma want more info on protag so they spy on him. they send Nate interpol and Rosa Team plasmaThat as far as i gotten. So what do you guys think and what should i change.