>>53104158>>53104282I finished reading the porygon story. It's the most original fan fiction I have read yet. And among other fanfics I dare to say it's the deepest.
The way you write what goes on the the mind of a porygon is so ingenious, I really felt I was seeing the world through its eyes.
My only critic is that the summary reveals too much about the story. I think I would have been amazed by the progressive reveal of the porygon's condition if I didn't have such a massive hint!
Other than that. Wow. Really loved it. In my opiniom it rivals Diaphanous Perception (Mienshao story). Obviously they can't be compared because of their length but if anyone wants a good short read, go read this porygon story :
https://archiveofourown.org/works/18259673Please write more.
