>>11672046I know, my point is that it's been overdone.
>>11672053Yeah, that's what I meant.
>StarterNot necessarily, but that can work too. If a trainer starters out with a legendary or an over-powered Pokemon, than that's a problem right off the bat. My main issue was characters, most often Mary Sues, not receiving starter Pokemon and instead getting Pokemon like Eevee. While Eevee is a starter in itself, the idea here is that it's been overdone.
>DialogueLook up Farla and read her reviews. Dragon Quill at blogspot. The issue is that her reviews seem like copypastas that she forces herself to comb through rather than actually helping the reader.
>NameYeah, without a tip-off, it can get kind of annoying.
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