>>54744805Oh fuck I forgot to respond to the first half. My bad.
>I also think you should find a way to describe the characters if you're going to stick with first person POVDo you have any suggestions? I'm not exactly sure what to do about that, other than to have them muttering their own species or something.
>It was annoying to read about Klarity stealing the human MC's shoes, It was annoying to read about Klarity stealing the human MC's shoes.This does seem like a pretty big problem. I'm not sure what else I was really meant to do though. As before, I will gladly take suggestions to improve it if you have any.
>Also, what's a "Pokehuman?" How are they different from a regular human?Tougher and stronger than humans, able to use Pokemon moves(though not as strongly as the ferals,) and generally beholden to more powerful instincts.
They're the result of a very poorly planned mass resurrection by Xerneas, and aren't exactly treated well because the early Pokehumans couldn't keep their shit under control.
Though they are stronger and require more powerful weaponry if you want to match them with weapons, they're not invulnerable. They also have some vulnerabilities that humans don't, such as RCG-F6882, which puts them into a much more malleable mentality temporarily.
Oh, and before you ask, her not having a description for other's face is entirely intentional.
She has some form of prosopagnosia, which is why she freaks out whenever someone turns their head directly at her. I tried hinting to it but I'm beginning to realize that maybe I'm going to need to be more direct over it.
(The human's name is literally only mentioned once in both parts by the ways. It's Gordon. I don't know about you, but I don't often hear my own name, and I sure don't think about it either. You're right though, I should probably throw realism to the sidelines for this story.)
