tried to write
>>63222236 again but used
>>63224874's idea of doing it again from Shiori's POV
first half is more-or-less the same thing as the original but i wanted to try and write it in a "what he sees versus what she sees" sort of deal. as for the rest of it, definitely found it a little trickier since
i was the one growing numb and as such, i'm not sure if i even did the whole "watching someone else decline" part justice
writing is pretty fun