>>61124154Hey anon! Thanks for taking the time to comment. Can't really defend the first point, It was a sporadic stroke of inspiration, so i ran in to type it all in. I have never been really used to getting it all in a white page like a note to write, i just kinda get it in place, fresh and baked. Its not really something i had considered, so i appreciate it greatly! As far as mistakes go, i had a bit of a slip with the word limit. Wanted to make it short, but ran into it. I put it in canvas as i elabotated, so i posted to keep going. I regretted it instantly as i read it myself... The action was all too short. Grammar is a literal 'i run the train as i build the road' as i am ESL. I use proofreaders on my native language, but for some reason i had not considered using english one, very obvious in retrospect.
Sorry to ask for more, but, what do you mean by me dropping the greentext format? It's the one thing i didn't quite get. Thanks a lot for the constructive feedback reader-kun! I will take your words to heart. (Even if i am a bit autistic with the making new habits part)
