>>51742333Balsa: Chapters Five and Six
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQzrFVPTbA29NkSkIIb2jcdc3jmfNrJoyMbtYUiOi3wkDlM6P0rHmQRXSFhhTMcdFOaDtcNY_H_OQMG/pubTags: (you), Botan, Nene, Polka, medieval fantasy, adventure
I tried to give anon a lot more reaction and internal awareness for these chapters, as well as provide a little more background for Botan. I'm excited for this arc but since I've never written something like this, it will definitely be prone to error so please tell me what you think needs improvement.
>>51767567I read back through it and I see what you mean. Just and oversight on my behalf. I'll see if I can't re-write it to make it more clear.
I hope you're enjoying the rest of it though.