>>25288494There's a lot of hot stuff in here, but I'd like to probe your brain for a moment. Where a lot of your abuse fics fail to click for me personally is in the final ~30%-ish. Usually in these types of scenarios, the abuser themself gets some sort of sexual kick out of the dirty talk and their victim's reactions, there's sort of a mutual back-and-forth between the two as the play escalates in intensity (though perhaps unwilling the whole way on the part of the victim), and it all builds towards a climactic moment.
Your writing, however, tends to characterize the abuser as genuinely, unironically disgusted by the flab they're mocking. Like, it doesn't feel like sexual foreplay so much as the feeling someone gets when squishing ants for fun, or baiting on a chan, or whatever, moreso dark curiosity/amusement than horniness. Even in your most explicitly feederistic scenario with OkaKoro I kind of got that impression, where Okayu's cold behavior felt sort of detached from her actions. It leaves a lot of these scenarios feel kind of blueball-ey at the end since the moment when the abuser's mood shifts to betray their arousal never comes and they just leave their victim with a serious grimace or frown.
Now, all that's not necessarily criticism, because you do it very consistently and with a lot of enthusiasm, so (You)'re clearly getting some sort of kick out of it. I'm just curious what about the fetish, and what about relationships like that *does it* for you. It's very unique, not consistent with how most other abuse enjoyers' I'm aware of express their feelings regarding the power dynamic
