>>20181897I appreciate your criticism, but I think I know what I'm doing. This Fubuki is actually created as a coping mechanism to the trauma I endured in the past (abusive father T-T) so yeah, I use her to live the life I always wanted and was denied by evil "dad" (dad in quotation marks bcuz I don't think of him as my dad) as well as to express the trauma that I endured thorough the characters I put there. For example, Mio is her best friend who only has one eye as well and half her body is turned into that of a cybernetic wolf, pretty cool right? But what most readers don't notice is that she is actually a metaphor for my sister! >.< pretty crazy stuff! I like deep things, and I tend to reflect that in my writing. I've been considering starting a book but... I have no money. That's life I guess x.x
>>20183268That's actually her cybernetic augmentative hyper stimulation cannon MKIII, she uses it to defeat evil when all else has failed.
>>20184240>>20184616Uhm... not exactly! See, there's this planet called Volcarus in which they extract these that are used for building heat resistant shielding, called Solarium. The process for mining Solarium is rather complicated so I won't get into that, but in short, the rocks sometimes end up contaminated with the gases of the mining process, and those contaminated rocks are thrown out. In this dystopian futuristic planet there's a city, and in that city, there's a slum section where Fubuki lives, and there they use everything they can get their hands on, including these discarded rocks, because the gases in them are great for relaxation and combat enhancement, but they are also rather addictive and using too much of it can cause you to slowly turn into a Tartarus, a vulcanic rock golem subspecies only made through this method. So yeah, a common misconception, don't worry about it XD
