>>21784504>>21787333>>21788443I'm glad you enjoyed it. When making this, I had in mind to do as much fetish bait as possible in contrast to the first part where a tamer fetish was deliberately chosen to appeal to the thread. Surprisingly enough, they both seem to have done just as good, maybe this one receiving more positive feedback somehow. I guess since I stopped focusing on the broad spectrum and focused on the individual, there may have been more passion involved, more thought added into details, I don't know.
>>21790402I don't know how you read through 12K words of pure fetish bait without being in a masturbatory mood, but thanks for reading too. When you say that the exposition of description of the spider should've been done in head, you mean in Pekora's thoughts? Do you mean to describe the spider through her eyes, or do you mean to show her reaction to the features of the spider more by writing in some of her thoughts?
And yeah, that orgasm line was a bit rough since I merged Pekora's thoughts with the narration. I've written many orgasms before and now I'm grasping at straws to try and make them unique from the others. This was one such attempt. Repetition of previous descriptions actually plagues my mind a lot.
>>21790689Equally as surprised, better reception than Shrunken Troubles and part one.
>>21791074The crazier the author, the more creative he'll be with his works. Most famous artists are notorious for being huge nutheads. I don't see why that'd be different here.
>>21793094Therapists are a meme. Just buy some games or an onahole with the money you'd spend on one and you'll end up way happier than the alternative.
>>21793532I actually disagree, people have strong opinions on certain subjects, I certainly do, and seeing something that you actively despise/something that contradicts with your ideals is sure to get an opinion out of you.
>>21795257Look away or you'll be next you fucking sexy kettle.
Anyway, look forward to part 3, sometime early next month, or maybe a bit later depending on how long a break I'll take.