>>58970059I like what you've done with my story and written your own out of it, I approve!
>being able to spend your entire life over and over again with Shiori counts a curse though.By normal ways of thinking, yeah this is true, why would spending time with your loved one be a curse?
However my train of thought with this is, you lived more than a thousand years worth by the time you've reached your 53rd run, your body is tired, your soul is tired, you just want to be rewarded.
Then you realize that all your rewards mean nothing and you have to do it again, and again, and again, and again.
At some point, even living becomes tiring and you just want to rest, but you can never rest.
You have to repeat everything, from the first day of meeting Shiori, to making her fall in love with you, to having children together. If you could restart already in love, it might be better, but having to re-do every single thing, and live every single day again.
That's where it starts to make someone go insane. That's the train of thought I had with this story.