>>8106752colors are not cohesive, you have multiple shades of blue. typically you also want to avoid *fully* saturated colors. not like you can't have a bright rice but try to avoid like #00FF00 yannow. Otherwise you should pay attention to stroke widths because yours are all over the place. just making a font larger will also make it thicker, so look around for multi-weight fonts you can use to try to balance things out. that, and maybe find some icons that mesh with your vibe a little better, your weather and wireless/audio icons are gratingly different. also, you're having legibility issues on your wifi and highlighted date cause you're too saturated on your FG and too bright on your BG. get a backdrop under the calendar or choose your colors better. the "activate arch" is cute tho
4/10 you're getting there
>>8106764
legitimately melancholic i love this
>>8109838
now that's a damn personal computer
>>8112080step 1 is making all your palettes and fonts match. your terminal, music player, and broswer are all doing their own shit. custom CSS for 4chan if you have to, and hide those ugly browser icons or replace them with something that matches the native browser theme. you could also use some padding and a real color scheme. don't use #00FF00 unless you're going all in on a tty vibe imo
4/10
>>8112098
god I miss my first mac
>>8123010
touched a nerve huh
>>8124033macs really kill it with those HDR black and white papes. mind sharing?
>>8125056
looks like you're pretending to work on a hosting server. theme your i3bar
>>8127053
your pc case has a glass window
>>8128165very pretty and cohesive, what's you WM and theme?
not a very busy grab and the pape's a bit light, but i'll invite rates and discussions. I personally only offer feedback to ppl that specifically ask. also what the fuck is with me not being able to reply to people? isn't this a fucking discussion board?