>>825678>shading with blackIt looks like shit. she lives in some kind of dingy depressing post soviet brutalist apartment?
Besides that, which is an obvious easy fix, you could study some drapery, and maybe if u want her to be goon worthy, you could. idk. make her show some skin besides underwear and the thinnest, eating disordered thighs I've ever seen.
Give her some cuts, too (personal prefference)