>>4470815I would have taken a step back so the traktor isn't cut off, but even then, the composition isn't that interesting. I would have walked around a bit to find a different angle and just not taken the photo if I couldn't find a good one.
>>4470816>>4470817Is this a 50mm lens? Look at how you're tilting the camera down ever so slightly, so the vertical lines aren't vertical. Very common issue in the 35-60mm range because you're very close to a standard fov, so the subtle up or down perspective just looks weird and wrong. If the tilt is obvious and pronounced like looking up at a skyscraper with a wide angle lens, then your brain can kind of categorise it as looking up or looking down. If it's almost straight but not quite, then it just looks off
>>4470818Nice subject and angle but the perspective a bit wonky again and the shot is too tight. Was there something at the edge of the frame that you wanted to exclude to get more of a clean shot? I wouldn't be so scared to include some uninteresting shit at the fringes if that's the only way to give my main subject some space. Also the colour in the sky is hella weird, start using presets or film sims, or better yet, just shoot film
