>>1456082The left bitch looks like absolutely nothing, so I can't even insult you for anything you've done. Because you've done NOTHING. FUCK. Look at that basic bitch design. Hurrrrrr, brown haired dog bitch. Durrrr, better give her some basic ass black west. The checked pattern is good. In fact checked patterns are my favorite, but it is completely wasted on this shit tier basic bitch deviantart OC.
Now to the right one. Oh, boy. I can see you have tried some shit, but NONE of it works. Let's start with the wings. Oh, hey, she has wings. In fact, she has TWO. TWO (2) WINGS!!2! I guess that makes her... *drumroll* ...AN ANGEL! Look! She's even got a halo on her head! WOWZERS1 What did you want to express by giving her wings? That she belongs to the heaven like all other angels? How does that make her special? It just feels like a 14 year old girls desperate cry for attention from her alcoholic father. Cut one of them off or cripple her or mix her wings up for fucks sake. WHY DO I EVEN HAVE TO TELL YOU THIS?? ARE YOU RETARDED YOU SACK OF SHIT!!! ???? Oh, and look she even has drills! But yet again nothings special. If you don't understand drills, you are not worthy of using them. GO BIG OR GO HOME. AND THAT SLUT NEEDS TO LEAVE. FUCK OUTTA HERE
FACT: It's not neko, it's kitsune. Get it right, fag. Plus too many ears, if those are even supposed to be ears...
If her powers don't match with her design, why does she even have them?? Huh?? Could it be... because... she's a--- *cut of and dies from shame for looking at your desperate attempt to create something original*
*revived out of pure hatred* NIGGER! And just like a nigger, she steals anything, like some basic bitch abilities.
And that dialog; that is NOT how people talk. Have your parents trapped you in the basement and cut you of from ANY social interaction whatsoever??? Because it certainly feels that way. When someone infodumps on me I punch his faggot face in faster than he could show me his deviantart, DOT.